Bird was never the flashiest of players in the NBA. He was not very fast on the court and was not a remarkable jumper. Bird has achieved greatness the old-fashioned way—by being consistent, by contributing not as a grandstanding superstar but as a team player, and by attacking every game with every ounce of effort. He spent hours practicing both with his team and alone. Sportswriters and fans alike have been amazed at how Bird knew the game, the basketball court, and where the ball was going to be. His timing and feel for the game was exceptional. He always seemed to know where he should go and where he should be.
stories of emotion between you and your father part of the closeness between you and a father, all that shows how close you and your father is.
1. “his smile is always bright when he talks with other”. I do not understand and do not understand in this section and you are not giving an explanation of the sentence would especially be true in this section.
2. here you are not so clear as to what and how to tell the father or the people you admire.
3. nothing that stands out from this story, that you do not really show the advantages and benefits inherent in the father or the people you admire.
4. I think your story is too round and round in the same explanation.
but of criticism above, your story is quite interesting